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Assignment 22: Elevator Pitch No.3


Reflection and changes: On my last pitch, I received the feedback to distinguish myself from market competitors in my pitch. I think this was a fair point since there are makeup mirrors on the market that attempt to solve the same problem I am addressing, but with the wrong methods. Most mirrors boast that they have strong, bright light, but that doesn't necessarily mean better quality lighting overall. Just because the light is powerful doesn't mean it is the correct hue or intensity. I think my mirror's unique ability to color correct lighting is what sets me apart from other vanity mirrors, so I included a line about this in my final pitch. I didn't change much else since I think I've got my pitch down to a nice length and level of description. I found that each of my takes hit around the 90-second mark pretty spot on, so I think I've got the timing down to a science.

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